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2nd Advent: Freunde...

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...sind wie Sterne. Man sieht sie nicht immer, doch sie sind immer für einen da.

English:
Friends are like stars. You can't see them all the time, but they are always there for you

A little picture for my friends :3 They are really important for me and I love you all :3
Hope you like it :3

Easy Paint Tool SAI; Gimp 2.6; Wacom Bamboo Fun

Maya, Art © =MirageMasaki
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Okay, I told you that I wanted to wirte you a Critique, so here we go.~

Let's start with the 'bad things'.
I'll start with the front of the picture, with Mayas' head.
The first thing that irritates me is the eye. The pupil is set wrong, it has to be slender. It could be your style, buut it destroys the whole, pretty effect there.
The second thing is the "Pony is over the eye but you still see the pupil" thing, you know what I mean, don't you?

Now let's go further.
The scarf...yeah, the shading is a bit wrong. Don't know how to call it, but there is a fold, and at the end of the fold...is no shade at all. I've never seen something like that before. And there could be more folds by the way.

Body and Legs are the next points:
Well, the only thing I see is the hindleg. I miss a line there, or a stronger shade where you see that she is sitting...*don't know how to explain it*...ah well, here is a redline: [link]

Nothing more with the Body, now the Tail...
Yes, I know that Mayas' tail is pretty long, but even if it is long, it don't has to fall down like that. It's like paper that you creased, sorry but really, it looks like that for me.

The Background is pretty simple I know, but you could do the grass a bit more straight next time, okay? =3
(I still wonder why you drew grass btw, there is snow everywhere outside here you know. XD)


And if there is a 'bad' part, there always is a good part.
asdf I love this damn rock in the foreground! I LOVE it! You drew it so nice and rocky and, and...Q_Q yeah. xD
Actually the whole picture is nice, I love the idea and the slogan on it. If I say so, I love this picture, even if there are some mistakes, but you don't have to care. 8D



Rating:
Vision: 3,5 Stars, because you got the slogan right in the picture, but it isn't really an advent picture. ^^"
Originality: 3,5 Stars, because it's kinda a new style and I like the idea, but yeah...something is irritating me here lol.
Technique: *too lazy to write that here now sorry. ._.*
Impact: Just can say that I love the idea, and it really made me thank about my friends.

I'm looking forward to your next pictures. ^-^
(hope 519 words are enough. oô)

~ =AuraGombe

PS: Sorry for grammar and spelling fails.